ur story is good but u shouldn't have made it premium as a result u won't get much traction

disappointing mc, book started out OK, then MC let's the power get to his head, and it's makes you shake your head. He just wiped out most of a group of cultivatorsl then stops ill let you live and leaves when he could easily decisively kill them all, that comes back to haunt him. the way he treats his harem is bad as well, when he had only the single wife he was nice and attentive to her, once he gets a harem he does not care, husband please kill the evil cultivators, slap, a regular guy would at least explain and talk to his concubine, not slap to silence her.

You've got a good story going, just don't stop halfway[img=coins]

I dont know how the heck I managed to get past chapter 500+ and almost at the end.. I means...the story started good but same as many of similar genre with so many children and I don't even remember who is who anymore and I don't remember the harem too... The cheat is great but lackluster at the end... The story also considered as not bad but the ending...bruh... Well...You can read it at your own risk because this novel still not bad...

It's a trash tier novel, things started out good till It went bad stopped halfway because I know what going to happen next.i hated the idea of the fact that the was creating an obvious excuse to get the protagonist together with that second female Leng woman. Stop making it obvious man it's irritating!! There are so many things I can point with this novel however I wont waste my breath reciting them. Think and plan better next time otherwise this is an interesting concept.

The story feels boring even though there's some threats, but the MC always seem so far from danger, witch I can accept if there's something else interesting about the story, but there's not, it's just getting worse and worse with the MC getting more powerful and harem getting into the picture.