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2024-11-28 12:51

4 ⭐️…but I need to vent my grievances. Loved this story. FL and ML was perfect and on par to what a romance story is (imo). The ending threw me off but brought me back with more love for these two. Don’t get me wrong. These are what I’m disappointed about…this story is sometimes to much of a one dimensional story with so many side characters thrown in. ⭐️Second Brother: it’s too vague about him and his where abouts. No back history about his where abouts. ⭐️Wei Family. What happened their story? No information or communication with the father and youngest brother? Wei Yichen shows up at the end? Mrs Yu? ⭐️FL foster parents? ⭐️FL’s maid and foster brother? Too much?! After they consummated their relationship…everything went on a fast pace of only mentioning the highlights. The story pretty much ended. I’m disappointed how everything and everyone’s life were but a narrative no longer a story. Did I want more? Yes a little more of a story then a narrative summary of the rest of their lives.

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