The novel itself is interesting so far but be warned that like always like most new novels on this app, the free chapters the translation is pretty good and there wasn’t any grammar or character gender mistakes and such but then when you get to the locked/paid chapters there’s a few mistakes either with the characters gender kept being mixed up then there’s the characters names being misspelled, and then there’s a few chapters where it suddenly switched to first person pov instead of third person pov. For example, usually it would refer to a third person pov and refer the character by name or use she/her, etc. but in some parts there’s suddenly a switch to first person pov like how it just suddenly changed and it would be using I,my, etc instead. Which just made the flow of the story off all of sudden and weird cause of the random change as if this suddenly became like one of those type of story that was written in first pov or like those story you would see on Wattpad story that’s Y/N kind of story where it’s in your pov instead so cause of this mistake in some parts it made it kind of I don’t know like awkward to read and affect the flow of the story in a way. Then there’s the whole mentioned of Japan/Japanese in this novel instead of just using some made up country or just use Country A, B, etc. I don’t know, it just made it unfitting for these type of novels especially those that’s in the ancient era and it’s a non fictional novel and Japan wasnt always been called that either so for this to be mentioned in this type of novel was just honestly quite weird and unfitting for this novel.
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