So, I have only read the first chapter, and everything seems good except for a very apparent flaw that is common with new authors, it's the fact that the author seems to have forgotten that not all readers are familiar with the Bleach anime/manga. just because it is a bleach fanfic, it doesn't mean that only fans of bleach will read it. Take me for example, I did watch 30 or so episodes many years back, and I barely remember anything. The author wrote the characters as if the readers should already know who they are. for example white Ichigo, Zengetsu and so on. he should've introduced a bit so that the reader can get familiarised with the characters. except for that, the story seems great so far!
Liked it!
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