Review Detail of JapaOuO in DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex
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I'll do the story analysis for now, we're entering the second arc now.... the story itself is well written, but a little rushed! the story is a bit reminiscent of the author *akikan40* and it's the story Riser Phenex isn't a villain.... I believe it was inspired by this story, but if it continues like this it could end up becoming another alternative form of the story * akikan40*
DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex
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JapaOuO:Observation: The story is not bad, but for me the story should change direction a little... for example, instead of the MC going to Sona, he tries to get another woman! as an example he could totally change course and go to Athena from the Greek myth! and hold an intelligence competition and thus gain the support of the Greeks! or even go after Freya
Observation: The story is not bad, but for me the story should change direction a little... for example, instead of the MC going to Sona, he tries to get another woman! as an example he could totally change course and go to Athena from the Greek myth! and hold an intelligence competition and thus gain the support of the Greeks! or even go after Freya
JapaOuO:Observation: The story is not bad, but for me the story should change direction a little... for example, instead of the MC going to Sona, he tries to get another woman! as an example he could totally change course and go to Athena from the Greek myth! and hold an intelligence competition and thus gain the support of the Greeks! or even go after Freya
It's not unnecessary, he could consolidate his influence abroad!.... and another, I just took this as an example that I thought of at the time, there are many more paths he could follow, and I just mentioned a few.... if he he also wanted to marry Seekvaira Agares, who is one of the heirs on the same level as the Sitri and Gremoy family
Gambit_bandit:why would he go to a whole other faction to get a girl, seemes pretty unnecessary