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Deippy_Deippy
Deippy_DeippyLv138mth
2024-02-24 15:52

I think the author made a mistake with the template and how much influence it has on the mc, it affects his personality as well as his appearance. Chaoter 7 and he has black teeth, blue skin and jogos eyes 💀💀, he also seems to be despising humans

Naruto: the forsaken

Lone_Courier69
4.0
34 Chs

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GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

What kind of snot and tears, what kind of forced drama, what kind of beta mc, what a disappointing main character, I hope after this he will become calmer and more indifferent, and kill his parents, including Jiraiya and all the residents and ninjas in the village, otherwise this fic complete disappointment and I'll have to throw this fic in the trash

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Luizz_Ricardo
Luizz_RicardoLv10

My God, this author must be a newbie to make so many plot holes and forced plots, the guy doesn't even respect the original characters.....................................

9mth
Honoured_Writer
Honoured_WriterLv4

So much drama for a fic revolving around super powered ninjas going to war like you’d think author was writng a fanfic on a sitcom with the way he forces plot development ruins original characters and creates plot holes the size of Authors weird fetish to make his mc the most hideous creature alive

8mth
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

The mc isn’t actually a curse but a b and can’t really do anything with himself because he’s a emotional person that’s forced to care about others It’s funny because if the story was more about the mc feeling lonely and going through something rather than him being a curse or acting like one I don’t recommend the story because the people the mc was supposed to dislike was suddenly important to him and that’s forced besides that the mc should at least be influenced by being a curse but isn’t so it’s like you’re supposed to be this person that only does things for himself but what you get is someone who doesn’t really care about himself and does things for others

7mth
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Are you gonna drop it? It's too early to decide, you know? Bah, coming from me who barely updates his fanfic. 😂

10mth
JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4

Finally a Naruto story that has a coherent power level! not people placing ninjas that can't even handle 5kg properly! I discovered this story today and I'm loving it, and I really liked the writing style! Besides, it's been a while since I read an AU that has Minato and Jiraya as a villain!.... and finally, to top it off, the story just didn't get 5 stars due to the instability I'm seeing when posting chapters

8mth
noobmaster36068493
noobmaster36068493Lv4

Like what I am seeing so far will change based on how it's going also I like the fact that you didn't start hating the monkey and kissing Minatos boots keep it up

10mth
Drimy
DrimyLv4

Reveal spoiler

9mth
Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Hello author I wanted to know if there is harem in this novel?

10mth
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