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2023-12-23 21:57

I must say, the effort put into this work reflects a genuine commitment to quality and creativity. The writing is clear, and the ideas are well-organized. The attention to detail is evident, and the depth of research adds credibility to the content. Of course, like any piece of work, there's always room for improvement. While the overall structure is solid, there might be opportunities to enhance certain sections for a more engaging and compelling narrative. Additionally, considering alternative perspectives and incorporating constructive criticism can lead to a more well-rounded outcome in future endeavors. In conclusion, this work is a commendable effort, showcasing dedication and a passion for the subject matter. It's a stepping stone for growth, and by embracing feedback and continuously honing skills, future projects are bound to reach even greater heights.

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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

harem?? hope not

Death_Knot
Death_KnotAuthor

no

Azathoth2:harem?? hope not
Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Can you tell me who is the female lead

Death_Knot:no
Lotus79
Lotus79Lv4

it's seem I read this somewhere, the same with family have blue silver grass spirit, having great ancestor but only blue silver grass, and make a strongest family/clan.

Death_Knot:no
DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

27ch/week is a ridiculous pace. I'd suspect it's either a translation or copy and paste

Lotus79:it's seem I read this somewhere, the same with family have blue silver grass spirit, having great ancestor but only blue silver grass, and make a strongest family/clan.
Silver_D_R
Silver_D_RLv4

DaoOfCulture:27ch/week is a ridiculous pace. I'd suspect it's either a translation or copy and paste
Silver_D_R
Silver_D_RLv4

Its a translated copy paste

Silver_D_R:
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