Item: The Villain's Side Of the Story In The New Plot
Rating: 5
Author: Fri123

Fri123Author11mth

2024-01-06 19:19

Hello, as the author, I'll award myself five stars because I believe I deserve it. The novel promises a fast-paced narrative, intricate language, unique character relationships, numerous mysteries, and various wars, starting with succession battle and ending with world wars between the humen and other races. The MC will not involve himself in the original plot, he will discreetly build hidden power, ultimately becoming the strongest on the continent. We're steering clear of harem elements, ensuring no dull characters or dialogues. If you're intrigued, welcome to our journey.

The Villain's Side Of the Story In The New Plot

Fri123

4.4

77 Chs

Liked by 11 people

Replies7

Vainglory0Lv4

Is this a rewrite, a sequel or a completely different story?

11mth

Nick_AlexLv4

so Aslin will basically go with Luke because she is fated to be a heroine and not even try to go against it again yeah?can we get a side story where she decided to stay loyal for once and be like FATE? Screw that i will be loyal to Fayelike does she only love Luke because FATE basically set her up to be attracted to Luke and blind herself like crazy???like does she even has Agency or does she decide to go with the flow and not ever consider staying Loyal is she even capable in all timelines to cut off her feelings for Luke and choose Faye ever? or is she doomed to be a puppet to fate and blindly love and choose Luke even if he treats her like trash?

10mth

Kurumi_Tokisaki_6095Lv2

So, will he hide his powers from the others or not?

10mth

mr_treeLv14

YAY I GET TO PAY TO READ A REWRITE OF SOMETHING I ALREADY PAYED TO READ

9mth

FunCatLv4

🤗 at last after chapter 30 we got to see some development to events and characters background .🤔I think without the system influence it feels somewhat like the classic vibe of previous story version.😭i really wanted to see the completion for the original🤨.but your writing is still exlant 🔥⚡🎉good luck with this one i hope you don't drop

8mth

Daoist1Q3rRALv4

please update soon

5mth

wxtfryterLv3

when you release new chapter

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zakaria_fLv15

Promising since it's a rewrite of a good novel. Waiting for more chapters to have a definitive review.

11mth

Wolf_Spirit_5499Lv4

The older version had a better development and writing. this version is at least 4-5 levels lower than the older one.

9mth

TruthfulSageLv4

Haha I orginally came here to cry for Fray to get an ending but have realized that this is still Frays story just different last name.🥳🙌

11mth

MiddleclassLv13

i don't know why author writting this novel again with new plot when Mc have a same old pushover type this hole novel story based on pushover who shoulders the responsibility of main character what a waste of time only pushovers like this theme.. I hate the original and believe me core of story is same so you can skip this pushover to some of yours losers friends

7mth

Nick_AlexLv4

Reveal spoiler

10mth

Liam_JohnsenLv13

Just curious why did u end the villians side of the story so abruptly ?

11mth

SebimonLv14

70+ chapters and I can confidently say that this version is better than the 1st one: - Characters felt alive and vibrant. - Good action and great fight description. - Fray is undergoing consistent character development. - Consistent storytelling. Points of Improvement: - Updating frequency is on the slow side. On a good week only 2-3 chapters. - We still need to see better foreshadowing to add more mystery to the novel (Rin’s backstory is looking good, for example) Overall, Amazing work author, wish we could see more of Fray x Zina (this was missing too in the other novel).

8mth

Kazuki_kunLv5

honestly, i see drop in quality in your new story. the way u write it as if the reader already read your old story. story facing is too fast. too many lost tidbits, n most importanly your character less conviction. you make adam personality like an exited teenagers.

9mth

Hardy1jLv14

The previous version was quite well written and since you said you steer clear of harem elements in this rewrite, it'll be an enjoyable read. Also, the fact it is still FrayXZina is going to be amazing. I just hope there's no redemption arc for Aslin and Luke.

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