Review Detail of Emmanuel_Capricorn in A Blind Man In Twilight

Here is an unbiased review of the novel. I give this story overall 3.4 stars. The writing is good, I gave four stars here but author fumbled with story development. It read it until 8 chapters and it is absolutely boring. There are too many Unnecessary dialogues that means nothing to the story, not even for character developments as they say nothing. Author needs to learn how to keep readers at the edge and not expect them to read on until something interesting happens. Especially writing at cliches like this, it is a must to spark intrest in the readers. Another issue with the story is the fact that MC is blind. It seems quirky and looks like an interesting trait but it is a huge hit on Authors writing, hence I have 4 stars even though grammar is good. the thing is, the story is first POV that means we follow MCs narration. But since he is blind, he can't describe faces, places or anything around the world, and since he is blind, the readers became blind with him. Author should've writirn in 3rd POV if he want a blind MC. And the romance that unfold is a disaster, I was curious on how author was going to handle it with the blind MC and he handled it poorly. Sight again is one of the most important thing in romance, characters looking at each other's eyes, getting butterflys. There needs to be a mention of the girl blushing or playing with her fingers nervously, looking away shyly, looking angry, looking beautiful in that dress etc. All of which became impossible since MC is blind and it's in FIRST POV!! At first I thought, its not so bad, it can be saved through dialogue and iItresting interaction and Boom .author changed Alices personality and made her a cold girl who did not speak much, like Ophis from DxD. A kuurudere basically. It is now impossible to write a beautiful developing romance in my opinion with that. I am sure Author is going to drop this story at some point and I want him to learn from this and not make the same mistake again. GG Author, I liked your other novel God of Void.