It's a great read and I'm always looking forward to the next chapter and looking forward to just how much the world will change from his actions. The single negative is how fast pace it is but even then it is better than most So definitely recommend giving it a go
Silent_stiele
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LIKESilent_stiele:Thank you for the feedback and support, I will definitely take your words into consideration.
Orion_Ridge:1 fml or 2 fmls? And can please tell me who is she / who are they?
That’s too bad, I think she was too timid and mild tempered in canon, it would have been better if you tweaked with it a little, in a natural way of course
Silent_stiele:Yes, but she will be growing stronger so that she can protect [img=recommend]
I will take that suggestion i still haven’t developed Hinata character much so there’s room for change [img=recommend]
machadogbc:That’s too bad, I think she was too timid and mild tempered in canon, it would have been better if you tweaked with it a little, in a natural way of course
If you want you could use Hinata’s personality in the ff systematic shinobi from jorginio as an example, I think that one really suited her
Silent_stiele:I will take that suggestion i still haven’t developed Hinata character much so there’s room for change [img=recommend]