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ToufiqUlAlam
ToufiqUlAlamLv41yr
2023-12-26 00:48

This is an amazing piece of art. First of all, the author kept the entry to the different world short and easy. The story began in no times. secondly, we have to mention the world detail. It was so vivid that I was actually walking through the image of the NEW World in my mind. The story is getting really good too. It did not seem boring. I am hoping the author will finish the story. Author! Keep up this amazing work.

She fell for her NPC lover! (Mature version 18+)

Darja_Renen
5.0
112 Chs

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Darja_Renen
Darja_RenenAuthor

My story unfolds slowly at first, focusing on deepening her love and addiction, but I promise, it will unravel in the most violent way possible. Stay strong, stay focused, but most impotrantly - enjoy! Feel free to use this section to ask any question you might have regarding the story.

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Ryker_Bale
Ryker_BaleLv13

Your writing style is exceptional. The vivid descriptions make visualizing the action and environment effortless. The pacing is spot-on, allowing the story to unfold naturally and engagingly. The characters are well-crafted and memorable, each with their own unique appeal.

1yr
ScribblingLance
ScribblingLanceLv14

The masterfully crafted world enthralls readers with its captivating blend of fantasy and reality. Anna's journey through virtual heroism and real-life challenges strikes a compelling balance, navigating the complexities of online connection and everyday pressures with emotional depth. A must-read for anyone seeking a VR story.

1yr
Ellie98
Ellie98Lv2

Writing the review after I finished chapter 14. The mature part is done very tasteful and the story is also well done so far. It may be a modern setting but thanks to the whole new world in the game it also has fantasy and a system element. Keep up the good work author and keep posting! EDIT: I just reached chapter 35 and I have to say how refreshing it is, when the main character has no plot armor. She can die in the most vile way possible and the story can still continue. I cried like a turtle when Bugak found her. EDIT 2: Posting the review again as I just reached chapter 60. This is a fking masterpiece. I love it so much I have a note in my phone with my favorite chapters, so I can return to them when I’m in the mood :)

1yr
r3a1m0
r3a1m0Lv1

I created an account specifically to rate this incredible story. It truly is a masterpiece that excels in its unpredictability, keeping me enthralled throughout. Thank you for this amazing piece ❤️

10mth
AtreyaNK
AtreyaNKLv3

Writing style is good and the story development is perfect. Character development would be good if added more details. Overall amazing novel!

11mth
younghand
younghandLv3

Just the kind of story I was looking for. Thank you so much author. I really like the way they met. In truth, I've only read upto the fifth chapter, but I'd like to take my time with this.

11mth
Lam1999
Lam1999Lv2

I was surprised by how well written these characters are. I usually look for slow burn, but this is a great approach! I love it! Their chemistry is amazing. Definitely a 5 star from me.

1yr
User_68934509
User_68934509Lv1

She being a herbalist makes sense, when the author explained the lack of greenery in her world, I was quite surprised by how amazed she was in the first few chapters. Update: Why do I ship her with every man she speaks to?

1yr
Gardbet
GardbetLv2

your writing style is really something else! it's elegant and beautiful without being too complex. I'd already recommend this novel for the writing alone!

1yr
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