Review Detail of AnimeWrite in One Piece: Starts With Vampire Devil Fruit

Don't drop like your other book

I'm not trying to be rude but when looking at the name of your story it gives mtl and Chinese vibes and that could hinder your story becoming truly recognized (by giving off those vibes I mean it has a very long name and with my experience that most of the time means this is Chinese )

(6)Haki Related-[Kenbonshoku Haki(Emotion,Intent,Danger,Strength,Presence-Sensing),Lie Detection,Kenbonshoku Sharing(OP:Film Red),Inhance Certain Functions of Mind(Thought Acceleration,Parallal Thinking,Multi-Tasking,Influence Internal Clock like Speeding Up Personal Time which makes the World around appear slow in View,Move and think at Inhuman Speed,Inhancing the Mind's Information Processing Capability,Speeding Up and Expanding Consciousness),Eiditic Memory,Animal Movements Mimicking,High Understanding of Elements(like Fire,Water&Lightning),Calm Mind,(Night,X-Ray,Infrared,Microscopic,Spectroscopic-Vision),Advanced Kenbonshoku/Precognition/Future Vision/Movement Prediction,Busoshoku Haki(Invisible Imbuement&Repelling,Hardening),Busoshoku:Kanri(Retaining the Devil Fruit Properties after Haki Hardening like Luffy's Rubber and Katakuri's Mochi),Busoshoku:Bogyo(Concentrated and Compressed Advanced Haki with Unique Shades like Luffy's 4th Gear Haki is Red and Katakuri's Haki is Blue),Busoshoku:Bugutai&Seigyo,Busoshoku:Kata(Mimicking Elements like Fire,Water's Fluency&Flexibilty,Lightning Speed &Reaction.For example-Luffy's Red Hawk),Haki Grasping/Pulling(Nullifying Other People's Haki Coating/Hardening,Even Weapon Coating could be Canceled except Eternal Coated Weapons like Mihawk's 'Yoru'),Emission and Internal Destruction/Ryou,Ashiagara Dokkoi(Sentomaru),Divergent Fist(Jujutsu Kaisen),Forced Spirit Fission(Dragon Ball),Kaido(Bleach)/Mystical Palm(Naruto)/Spirit Control:Healing(Dragon Ball){Maybe},Chi Manipulation{Physical Enhancement,Body&Weapon Imbuement/Infusion/Coating(like Aura),Chi Sense(Kingdom),Presence Hiding,Healing(Marvel),Chi Strike(Kingdom),Chi Blocking(ATLA)},Haoshoku Haki{Intimidation,Animal Taming,Knocking-Opponents-Out(Even Some Vice Admirals)},Strong Will,Haoshoku Coating/Infusion,Electro of 'Minks'(Maybe),Bio-Electricity/Venom Blast/(Maybe),Knee of Justice(Captain Falcon),Black Flash(Jujutsu Kaisen),Lightning Chakra Cloak(Naruto)/Shunko(Bleach)/Godspeed(HunterxHunter){Maybe},Observation Killing/Kenbonshoku Nullifying/Presence Hiding,Internal Organ's Temporary Haki Coating,For Protection Haki Coating the Ship's Keel,Haki Coating the Ground for Slamming Strong Opponents on the Ground,Internal 'Bones' Permanent Eternal Haki Coating,All 3 Advanced Haki Merging/Combining/Fusion,Honesty Impact(Koby),Dragon Fist(Dragon Ball){Similar to Shanks&Luffy's Combined Final Attack in One Piece Film:Red;In the Film It was a 'Chimera'-Shanks's Gryphon and Luffy's Lion which combined into a 'Chimera' but I'm asking to Imitate 'Dragon Fist' by using the Chimera Move as reference and Perform It Solo/Single Person) etc.] (7)Devil Fruit Developement[Beast Form,Human-Beast Hybrid Form,Seimei Kikan Hybrid Form(Refered to Rob Lucci's Variant Hybrid Form),Enhanced Hybrid Form(Refered to Kaido's Purple Hybrid Form),Unique Life Energy/Blood Coating(Refer to Kaido's Beast Form 'Flame Coating'),Blood Manipulation(Deadman Wonderland,ATLA),Wind Slashes(Kaido,Kaku),Telekinesis(Only Long Distence Object Lifting/Moving/Manipulation),Mind Shield/Protection,Telepathy(Long Distance Communication,But NO Mind Reading ability),Sonic Sensing(ATLA-Similar to Toph's Sensing through Earth,Similar to Enel's Kenbonshoku Enhancement with Lightning,Similar to Bat's Senses),Sonic/Sound Wave Release,Devil Fruit Awakening etc.] (Page 2) View Nex Page:

(Page 3) *MC should Acquire-[Devil Fruit Encyclopedia,Seaprism Stone Ingots&Handcuffs,Pluton Blueprint,Advanced Scientific&Technological Knowledge,Cloning Knowledge(Seraphim),Artificial Devil Fruit Creation Knowledge(From Vegapunk),Inanimate Object&Zoan Devil Fruit Fusion Knowledge,Pure Gold(Film),Skypean Gold,Adam Wood,Skypean Waver,Various Dials(Giant Breath Dial,Jet Dials,Breath Dials,Flame Dial,Impact&Reject Dial,Axe Dial,Tone Dial etc.),{Create a Better Modern 'Battleship' with Improved Awesome Design,Advanced Technology(Weapons&Electric Pollutionfree Soundless Modern Engine),Various Dials and Coating the Ship's Undersight in Seaprism Stone},Various Types of 'Den Den Mushi',Various Eternal Log Pose,Thousand Sunny's Ship Blueprint,Enel's Ship Blueprint,Develope Ship Spirit/Klabautermann,MC should get a Tattoo on his 'Chest/Back' about his Jolly Roger's Pirate-Symbol(like Ace) but with More Scary Realistic Skull,MC should also find about the Secret Giant Creatures of Florian Triangle,Secrets of Weapon 'Uranus'&Imu etc.*

can you tell me how old is mc in first chapter, also if I'm not wrong. boa sisters is just 12 years old when they kidnaped and Hancock is the oldest right?