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zelbard
zelbardLv46mth
2024-09-26 14:50

Good translation, bad story. Too many monologues that aren't connected to the story where it gets is only one conversation in a single chapter and the rest are monologues. And about his system power is kind of useless he doesn't use it that much and it becomes even more useless for the later chapters. The character of the mc is your typical young master ching chong so good luck with that.

Marvel : Godly Lottery System

Lord_Immortal_0170
4.4
418 Chs

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Lord_Immortal_0170
Lord_Immortal_0170Author

Shameless 5* review from the translator. I am doing my best to improve the readability of this story. But if there are still some errors, please bear with them.

1yr

ButterKnight
ButterKnightLv4

Good translation of chinese trash. china should be destroyed.

7mth
Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv4

I have zero complaints regarding the Webnovel translation. They are doing a splendid job. I know the original writer wouldn't be seeing this review but this fanfic would be a great read if unnecessary fluffy romance wasn't pushed in between. To the readers: if you can tolerate the usual Chinese trope of a rich young master giving shelter to a poor and illiterate beautiful girl who later becomes his wife/girlfriend/mistress then carry on.

9mth
redkingtfk
redkingtfkLv14

Great translation, shitty story. Add the villain tag, Mc is a hypocrite lunatic. Genocide is considered heroic now eh?

7mth
Jetboy76
Jetboy76Lv15

Loving the novel so far I’m just wondering if this is a harem?

1yr
ChrolloLoth
ChrolloLothLv4

This is a very good translation I appreciate you me effort for doing this the story is nice too I expected to be disappointed but I’m glad that I stayed

1yr
OnlyLucas
OnlyLucasLv4

Good translation, my friend... Although the story has some good ideas, the shitty MC ruins any desire to read the rest of the story. I can't describe how irritating I found this MC.

4mth
Tyler_rigby
Tyler_rigbyLv4

I like the MC isn't a hero or a villain he does what he wants for profit or to get new abilities he'll massacre an entire city/country (depends what u classify wakanda as) and felt guilt but he isn't bound by his guilt he'll just do what he wants to get stronger

1yr
Murod
MurodLv3

this is history has potential , continue ! [img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=монеты][img=монеты][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую]

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