Review Detail of Sosynovsky in My Stepsister in Kyoto

Your new story is very very similar to this one - “Life As Hikigaya Hachiman“. This is 1 star review I gave it, I believe that it also corresponds to your fic. “Too rushed, too forced. I got that this is a world of anime, but even so mc’s actions and mainly behavior are unrealistic. It’s surreal to get into a new body, without any memories in your head, and instantly adapt. Accept the fact that you have a sister and etc. Mc woke up in a new body, went cocking while chatting with his “new” sister like nothing and after immediately went writing novel from his old world. Like wtf is happening. I won’t dive any dipper, i think inf above is enough. Speaking about ch, they are too short. 2ch are equal to 1.” To add more, your mc is degenerate. Degenerates were popular years ago, now is era of out of ordinary main characters. Example- real Villain.