Review Detail of Vastoking in Time Emperor Champion
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The story started really losing its touch after the chat group area, not that the chat group was bad, but what's the point of making mc be an assassin in his past life when he isnt even acting like one, he is wayy too immature for someone in that. The author is also VERY HORRENDOUS at writing female characters. As for the good parts, its interesting and engaging, the story is very funny, at times though it feels the author pursues a more lecherous mc or ignores proper character interactions for comedy or hornii. Over all Its ok.
Time Emperor Champion
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I agree with this one.. I've read up to chapter 423.. although the story is good some of the plot seems forced and some of mc's decisions are questionables..the character development of mc is confusing.. sometimes he seems to have changed because of some event yet after a few chapters he's character turns back to square one.. He's also not using his abilities properly specially the group chat functions..The excessive character interactions with girls is frustrating..so many unnecessary drama. Overall it's still good..I just don't want to rate this since I haven't finished reading it so I will only put my opinion here
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