Review Detail of Ilovetv in In Marvel with the Force?
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I really like the idea of the story but I find that mc is growing to fast. I also have not really see him do anything interesting with the forces.
In Marvel with the Force?
Evandar
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My problem with the story : The mc is flat and boring and have not really show nothing special abou him The mc is to perfect like he can do nothing he put his to without failure making him more boring The orphan children could have grown they’re relationship with mc on screen to have more of a impact on us(like I don’t remember a single one of them) You keep just heading the mc thing like a system and kyber crystal(You could made a whole storyline about trying find something like a kyber crystal and build a lightsaber) If you want more ideas just text me (Just to make it clear I don’t hate our work I just think you can work on it more to refined the details
Evandar:Just wait
Ilovetv:My problem with the story : The mc is flat and boring and have not really show nothing special abou him The mc is to perfect like he can do nothing he put his to without failure making him more boring The orphan children could have grown they’re relationship with mc on screen to have more of a impact on us(like I don’t remember a single one of them) You keep just heading the mc thing like a system and kyber crystal(You could made a whole storyline about trying find something like a kyber crystal and build a lightsaber) If you want more ideas just text me (Just to make it clear I don’t hate our work I just think you can work on it more to refined the details