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Rishowe
RishoweLv31yr
2024-01-20 01:36

I really like this book, especially how the story moves, mysticism and supernatural creatures. The author describes all the thoughts of the main character very deeply and in detail, it helps to immerse yourself in the atmosphere very well. Thanks to this, it is very interesting to watch the romance that is gradually developing among all this, the feelings of the main characters, their actions and many secrets make this book very pleasant and intriguing to read. I would like to know more about the place itself, its background, and then it would be even better :)

The Perfect Alpha

CreativeWolf
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153 Chs

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CreativeWolf
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Thank youu, thank you for taking the time to read my story and leaving a review. I really appreciate it! ^^

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cool story overall. the author has a great imagination that created an entire world to revolve around the the very interesting and fun characters. the romance is a bit slow but it was absolutely worth it. this book is for you. definitely deserves more readers.

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Peppermint and roses indeed. Interesting characters, great lore. I really enjoyed this and maybe even have to dip into my pockets to read the rest on premium.

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ClueWrite
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I love the depth and vivid descriptions of the characters, scenes, and objects. This is definitely not your average, run-of-the-mill romance novel where the main character instantly falls in love with a handsome guy and wonders why she was played with or betrayed. The characters thoroughly think before acting, and it's suspenseful trying to figure out if her friend is truly looking out for her or secretly jealous! I would absolutely give this a read!

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Mary_Algen_Guiang1
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Before anything else, I want to congratulate you for your passion and hardwork. Now, the things I like on your book... First, I love that you used the first person’s point of view. It always feels more personal when one does that. Second, I also like that you have updates consistently, one thing I very much wish I could do for my book as well. Third, I like how vivid you describe the surroundings. You have a talent with world building, one I truly admire. Now on things that I think could be improved... First, some of the paragraphs are too long. They are hard to read for some of the readers, and could feel like a detriment to their readership enjoyment. Second, for your future book, if you can make the first chapter as a chapter between the female lead and the male lead, I think that would be better. I always try to start with their first meeting or if not, a chapter that I find really interesting. Remember that your goal for the first chapter is to catch your readers’ attention. Since your genre would focus on romance, you need the characters to see the possible intensity of the match. In the end, what really matters is how you feel when you are writing the chapters. As long as you are enjoying the story you have written, then the battle is already half-way won! Thank you so much for giving me an opportunity to review your first novel. As they always say, an author’s first project is always her first love. Keed doing your best and enjoy the long journey ahead of you!

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DaoistdoGnoH
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This is my very first review on here. It's a lovely read and like the author said, the romance in it is sweet so far. It doesn't fit the typical alpha type. The male lead is still a bit of a mystery but i hope to find out more about him soon. The fl is a bit sneaky but fun to follow. I am also intrigued by the World around the characters and all the secrets they seem to have. I am invested in almost all relationships 😂

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CreativeWolf
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Shameless review from author here^^ I just wanted to give a little more about the novel itself here. It is a slow burn romance as mentioned before, and in the first volume ( around 45 chapters) the story will be told through the perspective of the FL. This is where she discovers the fascinating wonders of the supernatural world. Most main characters will be introduced in this volume as well; their quirks, their speech pattern and behavior as well as their purpose. The romance will be sweet for the most part. This first part will end by the introduction of the main internal and external conflicts of the romantic storyline. In the volumes after that, the POVs will alternate between the FL and the ML, allowing the readers to get a better grasp on the ML's personality. The novel includes violence, tragedy, murder, blood and profanity. Content of sexual nature will also be present but not at the beginning. All in all, it should be a good and relaxing read... ^^

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