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XElenea
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This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.

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Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?

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DaoistjcJwtW
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Tengo una pregunta la historia tendrá agregado lo del juego de danmachi memoria free en la historia????????????????????????????????????

XElenea:You can expect poison like this: "In this world, Yamato no Mikoto is from an island country in the far east. It can be said that he is the Fuso person alluded to in the anime! As a native of Kyushu people from the Dragon Kingdom, Kong Yang's hatred and hatred for the Fusang people can never be erased from his heart!" Fuso/Fusang = Japanese Yamato no Mikoto = Yamato Mikoto You can see how it would have turned out if I hadn't edited it. And yes, the main character's name was actually that, but I changed it because I felt it wasn't suitable for a world set in western fantasy.
I_Love_Hina
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interesting...

XElenea
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MacKenzie_50943
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is it a long story ? I hope it is

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Sabaroth_zarkiel
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Harem recommendation :Danmachi :Artemis, Athena, Freya, hephaestus ,ryuu lion, mikoto yamato ,hestia, female bell, haruhime, ais ,alfia ,riveria. Fate:artoria (ruler) ,Morgana, Medusa, Jeanne de arc, mordred, scathact, rin tohsaka, minamoto, brynhilder ,mashu, Jeanne alter artoria (saber)High school dxd:rias, akeno, koneko, Asia, grayfia, gabrial, rossweise, kuroku, nyx, sona, opis

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Han28
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I would love to know as well 🙏🏼

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Ireallylikereading
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Poison huh, well as a person who chooses his poison i am very interested on just what the original was like. also if you were to rate the levels of poison from 1 to 10 in the fanfic how high would it go

XElenea
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You can expect poison like this: "In this world, Yamato no Mikoto is from an island country in the far east. It can be said that he is the Fuso person alluded to in the anime! As a native of Kyushu people from the Dragon Kingdom, Kong Yang's hatred and hatred for the Fusang people can never be erased from his heart!" Fuso/Fusang = Japanese Yamato no Mikoto = Yamato Mikoto You can see how it would have turned out if I hadn't edited it. And yes, the main character's name was actually that, but I changed it because I felt it wasn't suitable for a world set in western fantasy.

Ireallylikereading:Poison huh, well as a person who chooses his poison i am very interested on just what the original was like. also if you were to rate the levels of poison from 1 to 10 in the fanfic how high would it go
XElenea
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我在综漫世界无限抽卡

Crem_Brule
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How were you able to download the original?

Crem_Brule
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Can you give me your Telegram or Discord, can you send me the original?

XElenea:我在综漫世界无限抽卡
Daoist776770
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No me deja descargarlo e intento registrarme pero dice algo que mi correo no puede

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Crem_Brule
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I have the same problem

Daoist776770:No me deja descargarlo e intento registrarme pero dice algo que mi correo no puede
Goldenstar142
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I don't think recommending anything will work because this translated so All the girls are in after all there is no greater lovers of pokemon then Chinese they going to catch them all

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Harem recommendation :Danmachi :Artemis, Athena, Freya, hephaestus ,ryuu lion, mikoto yamato ,hestia, female bell, haruhime, ais ,alfia ,riveria. Fate:artoria (ruler) ,Morgana, Medusa, Jeanne de arc, mordred, scathact, rin tohsaka, minamoto, brynhilder ,mashu, Jeanne alter artoria (saber)High school dxd:rias, akeno, koneko, Asia, grayfia, gabrial, rossweise, kuroku, nyx, sona, opis
Sabaroth_zarkiel
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That's true Chinese do be like that

Goldenstar142:I don't think recommending anything will work because this translated so All the girls are in after all there is no greater lovers of pokemon then Chinese they going to catch them all
Goldenstar142
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Honestly as a person who reads All type of novels I already read the raw version of this I honestly have high respect for you for going out of your way and translate and edit this story free it from the disgusting Chinese influence on it because it's sad that a lot of Chinese novels have great potential to be one of the best fanfiction out there but bias and stupidity always end up destroying the story so great job seriously great job.

Great_maid_Oni
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thx for you work

Crem_Brule
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Can you post a link to the original?

Goldenstar142:Honestly as a person who reads All type of novels I already read the raw version of this I honestly have high respect for you for going out of your way and translate and edit this story free it from the disgusting Chinese influence on it because it's sad that a lot of Chinese novels have great potential to be one of the best fanfiction out there but bias and stupidity always end up destroying the story so great job seriously great job.
Crem_Brule
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Can you send me a link to the original?

Goldenstar142:Honestly as a person who reads All type of novels I already read the raw version of this I honestly have high respect for you for going out of your way and translate and edit this story free it from the disgusting Chinese influence on it because it's sad that a lot of Chinese novels have great potential to be one of the best fanfiction out there but bias and stupidity always end up destroying the story so great job seriously great job.
Goldenstar142
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Are you sure because it's honestly disgusting Chinese stupidity I can't give a link for some reason it's gets blocked but I can give you a name and sit it's called I draw unlimited cards in the comic world/我在综漫世界无限抽卡(至章节联姻 from trxs

Crem_Brule:Can you send me a link to the original?
Crem_Brule
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I found the original and to be honest I’m disappointed. Do you have some interesting stories about harems?

Goldenstar142:Are you sure because it's honestly disgusting Chinese stupidity I can't give a link for some reason it's gets blocked but I can give you a name and sit it's called I draw unlimited cards in the comic world/我在综漫世界无限抽卡(至章节联姻 from trxs