AUTHOR SHAMELESS REVIEW HEREEhonestly this is a pretty good chinese fanfic, i think it's better than the uchiha counterpart

it like other review suggested, have somewhat similar system(with its own toast), just MC is quite strong and had best babe to ****** at the beginning and story starts before start of 3rd war. The ony reason I give ones less star, even though I like it like the uchiha version, translation quality....it not great and may sparw a minute to understand what it means, liking to chinese phrases or proverb that is not translated well here

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While the translation could use some improvement the pace and comedic aspect of the story is perfect. I am writing this review to ensure it reaches a wider audience and hope this story is not dropped.

Mais o menos o mesmo estilo do uchiha Natsu, mas eu gosto quero mais episódios kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkk........

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more chapters please although there's a few errors the story is awesome