Review Detail of DaoCommoner in A Simple Cultivation
Review detail
Yes, I am tooting my own horn. But if no one will review it, I will support myself as an artist and creative. I wanted to steer away from conventional hyperbole in this piece, still there is fantastic and "immortal" characteristics to this "martial arts" novel, but something a little closer to human. A mix between xianxia and wuxia, not perfectly one of the two. This is my first novel and will be getting my feet on the ground, stay tuned for the future to come!
A Simple Cultivation
DaoCommoner
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I didn’t wish to add another review just to relay some information. I will put it here and hope people will see it. I am slowing down the amount of chapters being released and focused more on revising the chapters out. Hopefully the plot/narrative and characters become more refined. I understand there are a lot of kinks with the story. I will make sure to add a proper summary/blurb to the story. TDLR: Fellow practitioner requires some secluded cultivation in hopes of evolving, “I can kind of write,” technique to new form, “I am a decent writer.”
Forgive me for not recognizing Mt. Tai. *Bows many times, and many more.* If I had known I was in the presence of an esteemed elder, I would never speak so carelessly.
Daoist_Culture:You should try to add some culture there *cough**cough*