pretty meh, but for a legacies/tvd/originals fanfic, its an okay read. but like them, ut has glaring flaws, too much bashing (landon's to be exact, especially when their is no point to, because writers wrote him to be hope's elena and he did surpass her in terms of usability/character.) breaking the world power structure by introducing too much bs. it should have been like instead of becoming op, she needed to get points by changing/not changing the story and when she completes the world, then she can jump, not by being a wish fullfillment wannabe. its not as bad as introducing lucifer in tvd, lie what the hell, writer should just say it out loud he is trying to compensate for his nonexistent d**k. another problem is fmc's existence is kinda pointless other than f**king hope since plot remains the same(ish), no creativity. i short, if you have nothing to read, this fic wont be the last thing on the list, but, don't expect much (which i did seeing the lack of some other flaws, 1 star reviews or just the effort author put in writing words.) while on that note, author doesn't proofread enough to remove the redundancy in his words/sentences.
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Well besides the fact that it says you haven’t read this fic. 1: The plot is completely obliterated after like 30 chapters, as she kills Landon, Malivore, AND Clarke. 2: Landon is boring, simple as that. He was boring in canon, and he was boring to even attempt writing, hence the bashing. 3: She was always going to be Overpwowered due to the strength of the future universes she is traveling to.
It’s also a system fic, it should be expected that the power system would be f^cked when you have someone like that in the universe. It isn’t even the only world she’s traveling to. At the moment she’s in her fourth universe, one that has beings that could obliterate her from existence.
That point system for traveling would have made it go far quicker than even now. As at the moment, she can only world travel after a year (if I remember correctly lol).
its upto you to set the pace since one can drag on forever if they like, no? liek some isekai, the power growth is pretty fast, in other cases, it can be so slow,
ArtoriaPendragon_:That point system for traveling would have made it go far quicker than even now. As at the moment, she can only world travel after a year (if I remember correctly lol).
…you got a point lol. The current world (Arrowverse) is much slower than usual, besides timeskips that are kind of impossible to skip with how much time between each event. As for getting strong, that’s entirely because of the worlds she’s going to in the future, including: Marvel Comics Doctor Who DC Comics And other universes with nigh omnipotent entities. Her finally enemies are beings who can obliterate Multiverses, so…yeah.
WulfricTheodore:its upto you to set the pace since one can drag on forever if they like, no? liek some isekai, the power growth is pretty fast, in other cases, it can be so slow,
