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2024-01-31 20:19

Meh. I do enjoy the comic relief, but the characters seems like a caricature of the OG characters that focused way too much on their bad traits. The interactions were mostly comical, but it got tiresome real quick, not really a fan of Chinese' obvious fake scenario humor.

Harry Potter: I am a model wizard

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It has been 46 chapters and I feel that it is the appropriate time to write a review of the story. This story has currently over 600 chapters in RAWs and is quite interesting, which is why I am translating it. Another reason is that it does not only focus on Hogwarts but also the wizarding world. If you have questions, you can either write a reply to this review or join the discord server. I had previously written 2ch/day until chapter 40 and I felt that this pace was not possible for me in the long run because I am working a full-time job and this is just a hobby. I have read many works in the fanfiction category that stopped after a few dozen chapters, so I know the feeling of a story being stopped abruptly. Therefore, unless there is something that is physically preventing me from writing, I will not drop this story. For this reason, I am planning on doing 1 chapter/day so that it doesn't become a task to write because that is how stories are dropped. The other reason is time. It takes at least over an hour to translate one chapter with correct terms, slang, places, names, and other things. I know many readers spend 5 minutes or so reading one chapter that I spent over an hour writing, and terms or names that I spent over 10 minutes trying to find the correct translation for will just be overlooked but that's fine. I am aiming to write this with a good quality, as some might have noticed...well compared to the other "translations" where even the names of characters are wrong. Current schedule (may change for the better or for worse, but no less than 1 chapter a day): 9 ch/week 1 ch on weekdays 2 ch on weekends I may have gone off-topic with the review, but it is also a bit of information regarding this story that might answer some readers' questions.

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DrunkenDogo
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Not my cup of tea. I like a bit of comedy in any story, but this story is primarily composed of a protagonist that is constantly shameless, chaotic, and much too arbitrary. To me, it feels like the author is mocking their own characters and trying to satarize an adventure fantasy. I had to drop at chapter 20 because it was becoming painful to read. If you like reading about awkward situations, or if you don't like HPfanfics and want to read something that will give you ammunition for hating on all HP fics...then this might be for you.

1yr
Sparsh_Kumar_1064
Sparsh_Kumar_1064Lv4

A good read. Would recommend.,..........

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