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ShutenLv1411mth
2024-01-17 22:11

Writing is really good, plot feels good. Mc personality is interesting.- mc has way too many powers . and (species)- the TVD immortality (vamirism) feels like unnecceary- when there is too many ablities it takes too much time to try to explain all of them [ the balance between mc abilities explaining and plot could be better.]- (blood pressure starts to rise when reading all about mc op/too many powers and abilities)[in my opinion it really would be better if mc had only one Race/species and less powers]

Travels of the Daughter of God

ArtoriaPendragon_
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78 Chs

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ArtoriaPendragon_
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You probably should have expected that when reading her wishes. But she will stop getting new species (after werewolves) for a while. And even in the next world it will slow drastically. The future powers will also be more passive in nature, making them not as prevalent.

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MARLENE_ANGEL
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AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL IS GOLD. AUTHOR WILL BUFFY BECOMES LUCIFER GIRL.FOR 3RD UNIVERSE BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER AND THEN GRIMM AND CHARME AND MEN IN BLACK MOVIES AND FARSCAPE..THE AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR AN AWESOME NOVEL STORY. THANK YOU

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Antonio_Sanderson
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I like this Book [img=recommend] I hope it keeps going

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Shameless author review, nothing to see here!

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Lordgrey
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I probably already reviewed this story before but I like it a lot and wish you could restart it or rewrite it I am reading your other stories and loving them as well

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Cody_Mohr
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I hope this continues for it has great potential and I hope it continues to the next world to see where it goes

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MrStormalong
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Probably one of the most well written fanfics I’ve read. Honestly don’t know where to find good ones. So thanks for the chapters

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trey_murray
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I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Patrick_hell123
Patrick_hell123Lv15

I like your storytelling it's very interesting to listen to

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Tigercat129
Tigercat129Lv4

Awesome work keep up the good work you're doing great

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Brianna_wolf0951
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Heyoo, just wanted to let you know after reading this and waiting for a few months, if you'll ever come back to this? Also good job with the writing lately, and good luck with future writing!

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