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2023-12-25 05:12

Good until Naruto rejoins the academy. The writing takes a severe drop from that point on. It turned from a decent fanfic to a Young Master protagonist who lost all his personality so they just say quotes as if reading from a book. Thats not how Gamers mind works. I would have liked to see how his emotions affect his control of the 9 tails chakra or comparisons to his father about his calmness.

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