Well first of all 🥹 it’s a good story and I totally believe it’s gonna become better the author just have to give more attention to the story narration as well as it’s structure and be more extensive on the description, flexible even. Also proof reading would go a long way in looking for ways new ways to bring the novel good audience 😊😊 Good job author keep up the good work and do not shake no matter what Vibemagic @echo9ja 👌🏽
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