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the story is interesting and has potential but its very rushed and i cant help feeling it would be far better if the mc knew what he could do as a symbiote and what all his powers were, another issue is that right after killing drake he goes to ANOTHER scientist to get help finding out what he is, why does he trust this random guy hes never met, mc doesnt even know about the marvel universe but he trusts bruce cos he saw his name in a newspaper
Marvel - The primogenitor of the symbiotes
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I don't think I spelled it out that well, the fact wasn't that Prime would reveal himself or anything, Sara would just ask him what he thought about a life form like Prime and where it would come from etc, but after seeing that Bruce could also transform, his interest went to knowing how Bruce transformed into what I'll talk about later, and about him not knowing what he can do as a symbiote, that's actually directly linked to the story, there's no way I could make him know if that's part of the narrative. By the way, thank you for your honest review.
will be Prime with Sara always? i did not read all chapters, but i think would be better if mc find a man body
Rowen_Kun:How?