Item: One Piece: As Portgas D. Ace
Rating: 5
Author: WrittenInSin

WrittenInSinLv41yr

2024-02-12 01:18

I do not know who you are nor have I read your previous books. But this is a gem and I hope you won't drop this. Since there are only 2 official chapters there is not much to review. But the introduction alone has piqued my interest. My only nitpick is the essence of archmage. It is completely broken after all. But I'll see what you have planned out. Hope for the best. Good work Author 👍

One Piece: As Portgas D. Ace

ChaosWriter

4.5

20 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies2

ChaosWriterAuthor

But, He doesn't have the complete Essence. Whatever benefit he is getting from Essence of Archmage isn't outrageous to exceed the power scaling of the One Piece world.

1yr

WrittenInSinLv4

Perfect 👍

ChaosWriter:But, He doesn't have the complete Essence. Whatever benefit he is getting from Essence of Archmage isn't outrageous to exceed the power scaling of the One Piece world.

1yr

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