I don't have the jjk power up figure out that much, like I did have a plan to give the mc a fire curse technique that burn anything it come into contact with and all that stuff but didn't know how to deal with the complex stuff so this story a test run to see if the stuff I know about jjk are right and if not o fix them before pposting a tory where he main character use ce, do you get what I am trying to do

if you want that type of CT just go with Cursed Technique: Flame Domination and Manipulation, can create and dominate anything that is “flames” or “fire” Cursed Energy Reserves: Immeasurable, higher than Yuta Okkotsu and could curse someone easily if not trained properly Cursed Energy Output: High, can dish out huge attacks without feeling short in output. Cursed Energy Property: Burning, the user’s cursed energy itself has the property to burn even without using the Cursed Technique. It also means that the user is immune to the effects of their own technique Binding Vows: Revealing Ones Hand, standard binding vow for sorcerers. Peak of Daytime, the technique burns better at daytime but in exchange gets weaker at nighttime. Heavenly Pact: No Direct Cursed Technique Reversal, the technique won’t get ‘reversed’ even if run with Reversed Cursed Energy but in return it evolves the CT to become Temperature Fluctuations Domination(Heat) which allows the user to change the temperature directly of anything thus introducing “Burning” much easier Reverse Cursed Technique: Adept, could heal others and use it for Technique Reversal Domain Expansion: TBA yeah give your mc something like this. also i get what you mean but come on Mana just seems a wonky idea on an established power system.

If you don't mind me using this, this is the power I will give the second MC for the second story once this one end

go use it. and just change some of the stuff to make him more OP or give some weapons

No he doesn’t have cursed energy so he shouldn’t have one

this is Harem with Lemons?

This story isn't a harem I don't know who told you otherwise

wow. that is huh.... pretty detailed

Still you don't need to be to harsh on the author writing a story is harsh. And some people just don't have a good mentality to be thrown with cristism, he could just say that's enough and give up 🤣