Tally ho. Love the book so far pls continue writing

In general terms it is a good work, well written and the reading progresses smoothly, however I have felt a little lost in the first chapters, both the general atmosphere of the scene, and each other have seemed to me that They didn't follow a dynamic, but it's interesting. All the best

Really interesting story. The first few chapters have been a rollercoaster ride with ups and downs. I'm excited to see how Ari will heal with this system.

This is the first time I’m reading a story such as this, abd I must say it’s a very good read. It has beautiful characters and a steadily developing world background. Keep up the good work 💪

So far the story is quite interesting. The writing style and narration is easy to read and is quite lively which really catches my interest. The synopsis really needs some improvement. The new book cover is really nice which might catch the interest of the readers. I have a little bit of confusion with the title but it was the author's decision. Overall, this is a book with the potential for a wonderful story.

I think that it is definitely an interesting book since it gets steamy right from chapter 1 instead of the bush I definitely was not expecting it. has decent character development and storyline so far keep up all the good work I will be rooting for you until the end.

A pretty good book; however, there are grammatical errors that should be addressed. The story developed nicely, and the characters are well made and written. Overall, something that people who enjoy this type of book would love.

Well-written and articulated, still in it's early phases but everything was well thought out and flows pretty well. Keep it up!