Review Detail of superlazymagicgod in Neo Soul King Yhwach

My Brotha in Allah you got to stop using the "Name: dialogue" tamplate when making an interaction cuz it leaves much to be desired and is hella CRINGE for my literacy ball sack and it has endured even MTL Chinese nationalistic CCP aka BBC bullshit novel fanfics. The best way to make an interaction is to write the dialogue than put the name of person who said it with either an frown, anger or anything to showcase extra details of the character (" dialogue" said brian with a stern tone behind his voice OR "dialogue" a frowning brian appeared behind the tree with his index and thumb grasping his chin.) just be creative with it. Also the best way to do world building is through dialogue, DIALOGUE aka interaction with and between characters THAT MATCHES THEIR SETTING (sir Johnson, son of Jon, to the house of Jreald, is a grand ranked knight who is both polite and well mannered to anyone regardless of status or race, but don't let that fool you as he has shown the willingness to exhibit extreme prejudice towards those he deem enemies and evil with his sword as seen in battle of narmguirde fortress) There also huge amounts of details you could add in between the dialogue and the actions of the characters when doing anything (walking, seeing, noticing, etc) that what really makes the story worth reading especially in combat scenes where the combatants are shown their techniques not just through names BUT through details of how there techniques look (example, the "Rock smashing fist" Jons hands form into a fists, with his left fist near his left hip and his right fist moved at a blur to bury itself in the abdomen of knight of the Dradon) and mentioning the area and how it looks from the prospecting of an Main Character is important as it gives depth to the STORY and the world that's occurring around it. Anyways my bad, I want on a giant tangent. to get a good idea of what am talking about, read the novel 'I become a pope, now what?' it's pretty good and has displayed everything that I said with great success that makes me want to Nut, yes you read it right NUT, N.U.T. the thing that comes out every Man BA-- anyways that's enough yapping, have a good one. Writing Quality is ass due to the reasons above However the grammer is good (so 2 stars ) Stability of Updates pretty good 100 chapters in 4 months it's good(5 stars) Story Development- not sure where the story is going at some points as there just traveling and ceasing mass mayhem which is fine but it doesn't really follow Yhwach character as i thought he would build his civilization by freeing some suffering people or A.I's that are used for nothing more that to please their human masters that becomes his empire to conquer the stars and than other universes but this is the authors novel not mine. (3 stars) Character Design-the MC and the world setting Design already exist as it's matter of shaping it to create a story and plot plus Yhwach is a cool Character ( 5 stars) World Background - due to the vague use of words and lack of them to describe the Main Character surroundings beyond the pre-established setting( never-the-less it's a fanfic so 3 stars) An amazing story promise with great potential but poor execution.