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I really liked the story until about chapter 60. Mc has a sister, Luna, who began to love him as a man, not a brother, a long time ago, but suddenly it turns out that while mc was 3 years abroad, she found a girlfriend. And she even lost her virginity to this girl. Although Sister Luna also said that she loves mc very much for 9 years! But when she forced mc to have s@x with her, she said that they would have an open relationship, that is, the sister would sleep with both her brother and the girl, just wonderful. In general, there is Yuri here, it's a pity for the time spent. Although if you remove the Luna from the story in principle, then the novel will be good, but one moment the novel was completely ruined. You can delete my review, but it's the truth. My mood is ruined, I even went out for a sm0ke after that.
I See Love In You (Average word length of the chapters)
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I hope there won't even be kisses between Luna and Sam. I just don't like that Luna gave her first time to Sam, and not to her brother, whom she loved for 9 years. You know why I'm writing this, because when Lincoln came home and Luna became obsessed with him and wanted him for herself, during a visit to Sam, Luna passionately kissed a girl right in front of her brother, whom she loves, it caused me a storm of negative emotions. And the case when she was upset when she saw Lincoln with another sister, although Luna herself gave her virginity to Sam.
Hana_0_chan:Trust me, you won't even see luna and sam together.But if we forget about luna and sam. There will be tragic things will happen, not forever, but it will be tragic. I don't know if you'll continue reading. But don't worry about sam and luna, this fanfic is just about Lincoln, and lincoln only, no yuri
I will delete your review late if I can. Because you didn't watch the show, as I said you wouldn't see the yuriIn the show sam is luna's girlfriend, you lime it or you don't, the show is like that.So is we want lincoln to get closer to sam, we need luna to be colser to sam as she is in the show.You won't see anything like yuri in this fanficBut I think you're the kind of a protective person, you will se worst in the next chapters, it's not yuri but you won't love it. Just give up. But I won't let this review let others think it's a yuri fanfic, while it isn't
Okay, in the series, Luna was Sam's girlfriend. Then tell me if you can make sure that later they both love only Lincoln, and stop having feelings for each other, it's still in your power. If this happens, I will delete my review myself.
Hana_0_chan:I will delete your review late if I can. Because you didn't watch the show, as I said you wouldn't see the yuriIn the show sam is luna's girlfriend, you lime it or you don't, the show is like that.So is we want lincoln to get closer to sam, we need luna to be colser to sam as she is in the show.You won't see anything like yuri in this fanficBut I think you're the kind of a protective person, you will se worst in the next chapters, it's not yuri but you won't love it. Just give up. But I won't let this review let others think it's a yuri fanfic, while it isn't
Trust me, you won't even see luna and sam together.But if we forget about luna and sam. There will be tragic things will happen, not forever, but it will be tragic. I don't know if you'll continue reading. But don't worry about sam and luna, this fanfic is just about Lincoln, and lincoln only, no yuri
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:Okay, in the series, Luna was Sam's girlfriend. Then tell me if you can make sure that later they both love only Lincoln, and stop having feelings for each other, it's still in your power. If this happens, I will delete my review myself.
There won't be, but, I don't know you can survive chapter 16 (the last 18 part) it will have tragic, I'm warning you, I won't give you spoilers. But there is no more yuri (this is the last time I'm saying that.About 10 from now I will delete your review, because for me this review will make people think this is a full yuri story, while there is just one kiss in the story.
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:I hope there won't even be kisses between Luna and Sam. I just don't like that Luna gave her first time to Sam, and not to her brother, whom she loved for 9 years. You know why I'm writing this, because when Lincoln came home and Luna became obsessed with him and wanted him for herself, during a visit to Sam, Luna passionately kissed a girl right in front of her brother, whom she loves, it caused me a storm of negative emotions. And the case when she was upset when she saw Lincoln with another sister, although Luna herself gave her virginity to Sam.
I have a rough idea of what will happen in these chapters, and yes, I definitely won't like it. The whole reason I wrote this at all just hit me personally, because I had a similar situation with a girl who loved me, and I loved her, but I didn't know about her feelings, and when I was at university in another city, she first decided to "gain experience" with a guy to give me more pleasure later, well, she also tried with a girl, so that, as she said, "to try everything in life." I was shocked to be honest. And I will delete my review about Yuri.
Hana_0_chan:There won't be, but, I don't know you can survive chapter 16 (the last 18 part) it will have tragic, I'm warning you, I won't give you spoilers. But there is no more yuri (this is the last time I'm saying that.About 10 from now I will delete your review, because for me this review will make people think this is a full yuri story, while there is just one kiss in the story.
This is me hana_chan. I can't reply from the other account, because we had a lot of replys Any way that's what I said: Ohhh, sorry to hear about that, that's awful. It's just fanfic and novels are for imagination, not being related to the real world, but, I don't know what say anymore actually. So, I don't know if you're going to keep reading. . But If you're not a fan of r * pe, I have really to warn you not to read more chapters of this story. You go to my other stories, they are not fanfic, and there is 100% no yuri no tragic
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:I have a rough idea of what will happen in these chapters, and yes, I definitely won't like it. The whole reason I wrote this at all just hit me personally, because I had a similar situation with a girl who loved me, and I loved her, but I didn't know about her feelings, and when I was at university in another city, she first decided to "gain experience" with a guy to give me more pleasure later, well, she also tried with a girl, so that, as she said, "to try everything in life." I was shocked to be honest. And I will delete my review about Yuri.
Thanks for your answers, I appreciate it. I'm going to bed now and I think I'll watch your other novels in the morning. Indeed, there are too many tragedies in real life around me to read tragic things on the Internet. And as promised, I'm deleting my review.
Luz88:This is me hana_chan. I can't reply from the other account, because we had a lot of replys Any way that's what I said: Ohhh, sorry to hear about that, that's awful. It's just fanfic and novels are for imagination, not being related to the real world, but, I don't know what say anymore actually. So, I don't know if you're going to keep reading. . But If you're not a fan of r * pe, I have really to warn you not to read more chapters of this story. You go to my other stories, they are not fanfic, and there is 100% no yuri no tragic