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ShadowScripter77
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2024-01-25 19:42

I I hadn't known that this was the Whoami_'s first work, I wouldnt't know. The flow of the story is natural but I think the pacing could be better. I would like to read more!!! Kudos to the author!

Depth of Sanity

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Gift_Simeon
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I'm surprised that this is your first novel. The way you started it got me doubting because it felt natural like a pro. The psychological vibe also feels unique. I'm not much into this type of book but this one is a total exception. I'm definitely adding it to my collection

1yr

Whoami_
Whoami_Author

Greetings readers, this is the first time I'm writing a novel. My lack of experience is noticeable. Therefore, I'm in deep appreciation if someone generously leaves a few words to note me for the mistakes I've made especially in my grammar and writing qualities. Therefore the energy I might receive from the comment will help me stay awake and keep the entertainment with a satisfying update stability. Have a great day:)

1yr
GuYueJiRen
GuYueJiRenLv3

excellent , what an amazing story of psychology , I love the story and world building and updating stability..so beautifully written .. Keep it up👌

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Alexcj
AlexcjLv4

I don't give reviews that much because I am an author too, but I have to admit the story it quite good. I would advise everyone to read this book, although they aren't that many chapters but am sure the author would update more. please give us more chapters 🤲

1yr
Jinx_Lee
Jinx_LeeLv3

What a wonderful story. This type of story with a psychological vibe really caught my attention. It's like i am reading a webtoon while reading it. Keep up the good work!

1yr
Tres_Aguila
Tres_AguilaLv14

This is one intriguing story that will keep you yearning for more. With just a minor editing, the novel is set for perfection. I have only one advice for the author, continue updating and keep your readers spell bound. Bravo 👏👏👏👏👏

1yr
GTHarris08
GTHarris08Lv3

I'd say this is pretty impressive for your first try.The story is intriguing and has a certain pull to it that makes me want to read more.please update more chapters.

1yr
Sad_Storyteller
Sad_StorytellerLv2

Just love the arrogant demeanor of the MC. Never read book Witten in this style before, buts it's okay. Grammar is almost impeccable, needs some minor editing. Overalls for he boom is great. Please update

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