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RadicalHuman02
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Well hi there! Been reading your work for a very hot minute. I see you really like the whole time manipulation gimmick, can't blame you. I have moments where I use a specific idea in different stories I write down to myself. So far your writing is still noticeably good, I can see some issues. Such as the main character adapting a tad too quickly, but at the same time it's not a big deal. Please do not stop writing! I enjoy your writing. And whenever you can, if you want it would be awesome of you to update the time manipulator in marvel fanfic. Well done!

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Hero x Villain Online (ARRPG)

SurelyNotEli

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SurelyNotEli
SurelyNotEliAuthorSurelyNotEli

Interesting. I agree that he adapts very quickly. I thought that’s what people wanted. Usually my MCs are called idiots 😕 Nonetheless I appreciate the review!

SurelyNotEli
SurelyNotEliAuthorSurelyNotEli

Well, this story isn't a passion project of mine. The goal is for it to become popular and make money (As you can see, I am failing). Unfortunately, most people are not smart like you and think someone taking the time to learn means they are stupid. I have been a writer on webnovel for 3? years now. I have adapted lol. If I were making a story for my own enjoyment, this story would not exist as I hate this genre really. It would have been your regular superhero story but I wanted to see if I could make a crowd-pleaser (As you can see I am failing). You live and you learn I guess.

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