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Bell_Cranel_5395Lv111mth
2024-02-11 22:43

Story is decent, but needs more improvemnt in terms of world building, the characters need to be fleshed out more so that they dont seem like npc's. another thing is harem tag just annoys me man just make a 1 on 1 relation between the mc and the love intrest rather than him going around baning multiple other heroines.

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VictorElderblood
VictorElderbloodLv12

that sounds like a you issue

smilesssss
smilesssssLv14

Giving 1 star just because of that seems a bit harsh, you could have given 3 at least or that's what I would have done from reading your review.

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