Item: The 100: AllFather
Rating: 3.6
Author: nicolas_gonzalez_5220

nicolas_gonzalez_5220Lv11yr

2023-12-19 08:16

La historia es buena y me gusta el mc en su mayoria. El problema que tengo con el mc es que su personalidad no es estable, con esto quiero decir que no reacciona a las situaciones en base a su conosimiento, o como te lo presentan y termina reccionando en base a la trama original para encaminar la historia por lo que carece de originalidad y solo sigue la trama con un toque magico. Yo personalmente lo dejo si quiero ver the 100 lo voy a volver a ver y no leer un fic. Español.

The 100: AllFather

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