Review Detail of Inkbank in BOUND BY MOONLIGHT: A Tale of Love and Loyalty

I think the story starts of strongly. The use of words in the first paragraph easily set the scene for me (and most likely other readers) to be immersed in the world Valerie has found herself in. I find your use of words to be captivating— you do have a way of playing around with words which makes you a genius. Moving on to the story itself, Valerie finds herself in a strange place and doesn't remember where she is. She is very much aware of her strange surroundings and sort of feels a connection, then she is having a conversation with the Alpha who tells her that the moonlight will reveal the truth, and that her destiny is somewhat intertwined with theirs. Now, while all that was portrayed beautifully, I feel like it was lacking a bit in emotions.Valerie is in a strange place and doesn't remember anything and the only emotional conflict within her is a "where am I" dialogue and when she spoke to the Alpha telling him that she did not remember anything about herself. In all of that, I feel like there's no detailed insight on how she truly feels. It's all vague and most of it is embedded in a dialogue which does not show the emotions. It only tells.Also I noticed that at some point there is a switch from Valerie's first person's POV to a third person's POV. Like chapter one is 1st person's POV, chapter two in 3rd person and chapter 3 is in 1st person. It's advisable to stick to one as it makes the reading flow easier.The last thing I'll like to point out is the (do I call it an explanation?) at the end of some chapters. For example, in chapter two (starting from the third to the last paragraph)In the gripping climax of bound by moonlight, The werewolf...I am not exactly sure why the three paragraph review/explanation/recap was put there (maybe you have your reason for it— perhaps the plot is a bit complex and some might struggle to understand) but I think it's unnecessary because the chapter is still fresh in your readers mind. Instead, let them unravel that by themselves as they continue to read further.You have done well so far! Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more.