4 chaps in, story seems promising, a not so short chapter, probably a blend between sports and highschool type of anime, as of now there's from knb, ahiru no sora, (hopefully there's also slam dunk), as for the grammar it's good, very readable and not confusing, no cheats (probably as it's still in the 4th chap), i guess the mc got good from his own experience, training, and his little(or high) knowledge about medicine when he's bored at the hospital or somethini just want to say this is probably a hidden gold just spawning, so give it a try guys, and pardon me if you find it hard to understand what i say (english is not my main language)i will give it 5 stars for now, and hope this work got boosted a little and more people read it
JunBlossom
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LIKEJunBlossom:Your in for a ride then ahahahah Well once you have read most sports novels, you have to make do with newer content. But mostly they are uncertain, because its the like 10/30 chapter mark that realy gets people, building something which doesn't have any requirements to improve and such.
Yap28:author even if you like my review i will still ask for chaps today 😂
And by the way, Thank you for the review although I think it is early, I appreciate it eh eh. I hope my story does bring you enjoyment and excitement.
JunBlossom:Ahahahah I can see... I do read don't worry. I'm writing more because of the comment so yeah.
because it is early, that you need review bro, idt many people would want to try reading fan fic with only a few chaps, the more people see the less it might get abandoned in early chaps 😂
JunBlossom:And by the way, Thank you for the review although I think it is early, I appreciate it eh eh. I hope my story does bring you enjoyment and excitement.
Yap28:because it is early, that you need review bro, idt many people would want to try reading fan fic with only a few chaps, the more people see the less it might get abandoned in early chaps 😂
well... probably, i dont really know bout the others, but i honestly only read fanfics with few chaps because i got bored and want to try something new, maybe found some gems and leave my mark as one of the first reader lol
JunBlossom:Oh it works that way? I am a newbie in this writing thing, gotcha.
Your in for a ride then ahahahah Well once you have read most sports novels, you have to make do with newer content. But mostly they are uncertain, because its the like 10/30 chapter mark that realy gets people, building something which doesn't have any requirements to improve and such.
Yap28:well... probably, i dont really know bout the others, but i honestly only read fanfics with few chaps because i got bored and want to try something new, maybe found some gems and leave my mark as one of the first reader lol