Let's see how this unfolds. I will get a can of drink. I have seen a good novel. The characters are well constructed. The world backgrounds are okay. The story development is addictive.

So far it's been a good read. I am interested in seeing how the characters would be fleshed out even more, especially the MC. The dialogue and worldbuilding has been solid, and am looking forward to seeing how everything would develop.

So far, it's interesting. The grammar, the pacing, the character, and the world building are solid by far. I hope you continue to improve. In short, I like it,

I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment. It may be a modern setting but it also has fantasy and a system element.. Great Pacing! I took liking in Kei Sato, he is truly a well written character! Good job author, I Recomend it 10/10!

Author's own shameless 5-star plug! Diving into this novel, you'll find a riveting narrative filled with suspense and unexpected twists. Crafted with passion, each page is storytelling at its finest. An essential read for enthusiasts of thrilling sagas. Trust me, you won't be disappointed!

I enjoyed the book and the author's writing style. It kept me engaged and interested in the story. The plot and characters were intriguing, making me want to read more.

This novel is quite good. I like the character and the story development very much. Good work.

this is a good novel I advise everyone who reads the reviews first and then decides whether to read it or not, I immediately say read it and write your opinion

The writing style is great , nice detailed story line . The action is interesting , keeps me on the edge pretty well . Keep up the good work ! I liked it !