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nadaxzq
nadaxzqLv112mth
2023-12-19 13:08

Hello, author. Well, what can I say about that... I've seen this "Unlimited Epiphanies" idea before, but it was written by what could only be described as a young, hot-blooded racist Chinese man who didn't care about exploring the potential of what should be the focus of his novel, exploring the maximum capacity of this system while the MC follows his journey. And finally here I discovered a gem. From the beginning, MC has already explored the IMMENSE potential that its system offers. The MC's first interaction with other characters already suggests that this will be a very well-written story, with no flat characters and no apparent motivation to do what they do. You really took the time to create a backstory (even a basic one) for Yingling. 😨 Normally other authors would simply say very quickly what happened to her and voilà, a member of the harem, a member who doesn't know how to think for himself and just follows the MC like a dog. Normally this should be the basics, but there are few authors nowadays who care about this. Anyway, if well explored, the novel has gigantic potential because of the system. If combined with some good plot and non-2D characters, this is possibly a masterpiece in the making. I'm not good at evaluations, so it must be a little difficult to understand what I said. I apologize in advance. Continue your work, author. Good luck!

Cultivation: I Have Unlimited Epiphanies in the Cultivation World

Lolster45
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Lolster45
Lolster45Author

Thank you so much😭😭 Although it's my first novel ever, I hope I won't disappoint you. Leave any suggestions in the comments as to how I can improve and if I start to go astray. Thank you again for your review 💓.

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TrueMonarch00
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Polygamy
PolygamyLv4

is this a harem or no harem?

Lolster45:Thank you so much😭😭 Although it's my first novel ever, I hope I won't disappoint you. Leave any suggestions in the comments as to how I can improve and if I start to go astray. Thank you again for your review 💓.
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Lolster45
Lolster45Author

Right now, I'm leaning towards non harem, but it could change depending on what readers want.

Polygamy:is this a harem or no harem?
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Fkhri_Maulana
Fkhri_MaulanaLv12

I vote non harem

Lolster45:Right now, I'm leaning towards non harem, but it could change depending on what readers want.
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That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

Same

Fkhri_Maulana:I vote non harem
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That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

Did you decide?

Lolster45:Right now, I'm leaning towards non harem, but it could change depending on what readers want.
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nadaxzq
nadaxzqLv1

reviewing again. This is very, very good. Read it, the author will not disappoint you. the only disappointment you will have in this novel is having to wait 2 days for chapters🥺

9mth

Michael_Desalisa_7535
Michael_Desalisa_7535Lv11

i like it very much. The way the author insert funny moments is really amazing. Thank you

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Daoist2MagJ2
Daoist2MagJ2Lv14

it's really good I just popped in hear to say that I'm not that good at reviews

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TrueMonarch00
TrueMonarch00Lv14

I’m not someone who rights reviews constantly, but I had to to promote the author and this book/novel. I have seen a similar concept of the novel but this one far out shines it. I’m not a am of many words, so I hope you can at least try the first 5 chapters, the book won’t let you down.

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Grand_Void_Daoist_4510
Grand_Void_Daoist_4510Lv2

Seen this book from Maulanah's list, and iIliked it ,didn't know that it would be this goood Message to the Author : Don't drop this ,continue with the work! Message to the readers : If you don't read this ,then Humph ![it's your loss anyway]

8mth
Ecrylixx
EcrylixxLv4

The only issue I currently have with this novel is it's update speed considering the shorter chapters, but I also understand that you can't always control that. Other than that it's amazing and while I don't particularly see it as an issue I suggest trying to post a few chapters without the AI edits. I've seen a few paragraphs written twice once in your own words and others edited and I feel like yours is more normal if that makes sense. And if you haven't already chosen I'd say go the harem route because he'll need more companions using his own cultivation system and I don't see him getting too close to males with how this technique enhanced Yinlings' looks. Preferably females that would question HEA like Elder Ai though.

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