Review Detail of DarkFight3r in Eternal Temptation: Awakening Sinful Desires

I thought its going to be a good story, but man am I disappointed! Nothing happens in the first 15 chapters only some minor smut with horrible dialogue. Its as if no original thought went into the story. And dont come with read further it gets better crap, the most important thing is to make the first chapters good to capture the reader.