Overall the story is very interesting. More importantly, its not a idiotic harem or a psychotic snuff fantasy. While the MC is somewhat OP, he is still restrained by the limitations of Nen, which he works around using proper limitations. While there is a system concept, it is far less overpowered then most Isekai stories. As such, you are unlike to see the MC equal some of the top tier Nen user in the series; though his ingenuity does exploit the fact that stronger Nen user can be taken down by weaker Nen users through opportunity, condition, and deception. The only issue I have is that as a Chinese translation, the translator leaves a lot of the grammatical story telling structure, such as the use of Brother, Sister, Aunt, and other when referring to the people in the story. For example, when an older character refers to the MC, they usually use little brother MC or when referring to Biscuit, instead of calling her Bisky-chan, as they do in the anime/manga, she wishes to be referred to as Sister Biscuit. While it does not make the translation bad, it can be distracting.
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it's hard to find a good female lead on HxH anyway..
The best as far as I am concerned is What Was Needed by Serenechaos The Problem with Female OC/SI is that for the most part it is a wish fulfillment where they get with one of the main cast, either one of the four protagonist, Hisoka, Illumi, or one of the Phantom troupe. The problem with each is that out of the four main characters Gon and Kurapika are an automatic no-go unless you change Kurapika's past so much he no longer resembles his original character, Killua requires a subtle match that can flow with his character and not 'fix' him, and Leorio just does not appeal to the fangirl mentality. The problem with Hisoka, Illumi, and the Troupe is that they are all psychopaths of the highest order that see absolutely nothing wrong with torturing and murdering scores of innocent men, women, and children, which means that they completely alter them to fit their narrative, which is usually done horribly.
