the stupid guy the author talks about in his last chapter had a criticism that he explained (the mtl diagram that he didn't like) but the author still insults the guy. This is the kind of behavior that I hate when they explain to you why they don't like something and you still allow yourself to insult the guy, that's why I'm going to note the author and not the story
ItachiWeasel
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LIKEbro critisicm should be about the story and if u don't like the story I can't do anything about it I am still a beginner if I could write at the the top level from the beginning I would have written so many fics by now I can accept that I got angry well that's how I am if he just said that the fic was bad I would not care but he accused me if plagiarism so I got pissed off other than that thanks for reading
bro u dont have any useful criticism u keep saying this is mtl and from Chinese it's so illogical and top of that u are not saying what are the issues u have with the fic if u don't like characters of the show I can't do anything about it if u don't like the fic just leave bro there are so many other fics out there stop posting as if u are giving any helpful advice