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Sylar_in_7
Sylar_in_7Lv101yr
2023-12-14 14:53

the stupid guy the author talks about in his last chapter had a criticism that he explained (the mtl diagram that he didn't like) but the author still insults the guy. This is the kind of behavior that I hate when they explain to you why they don't like something and you still allow yourself to insult the guy, that's why I'm going to note the author and not the story

In TVD/TO as Kol Mikaelson

ItachiWeasel
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33 Chs

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ItachiWeasel
ItachiWeaselAuthor

bro critisicm should be about the story and if u don't like the story I can't do anything about it I am still a beginner if I could write at the the top level from the beginning I would have written so many fics by now I can accept that I got angry well that's how I am if he just said that the fic was bad I would not care but he accused me if plagiarism so I got pissed off other than that thanks for reading

1yr
ItachiWeasel
ItachiWeaselAuthor

bro u dont have any useful criticism u keep saying this is mtl and from Chinese it's so illogical and top of that u are not saying what are the issues u have with the fic if u don't like characters of the show I can't do anything about it if u don't like the fic just leave bro there are so many other fics out there stop posting as if u are giving any helpful advice

1yr
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ItachiWeasel
ItachiWeaselAuthor

this is purely tradition and self motivation kindly give reviews and tell me where to improve I will probably release more chapters today

1yr

ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv14

Besides the rather Eh grammar. The actual plot is pretty freaking good. The author got Kol rather spot on, and some of the explanations for stuff like magic, is pretty interesting and plausible. The only hope I have is that the author gives him a halfway decent love interest (or love interests) like Bonnie, Davina, or even Caroline. (Or two of them if they want)

1yr
AvatarLOK2
AvatarLOK2Lv3

This is fun. I'm loving the personality of the characters. I can feel the distinctness of each. The writing formatting isn't my favorite and could potentially be improved upon more but, I like it. This story has a lot of potential and I hope you continue and improve.

1yr
prince7777
prince7777Lv5

pls 🙏 don't leave it have wayit's a good novel

1yr
night_king01010
night_king01010Lv4

its amazing! looking forward to it don't end it in the middle

1yr
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Legion_Lv1

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Cody_Mohr
Cody_MohrLv4

I like the smoothness of the rewrite I look forward to the continuation and hope to see mc go to another world of magic like charmed to see how it would go or another magical world like teen Wolf to see what happened with The originals in those worlds

8mth
Flint679
Flint679Lv4

This story is amazing. I look forward to reading more.

1yr
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