Review Detail of NRY_Rah in My next life as a male extra? [Hiatus]

I'm not a shameless writer, the reason I gave this rating is because my writing skills need to be improved.So I will rewrite it again so that readers can read in more detail about the shape of the world, character interactions, and the quality of the writing. I hope it will be more detailed and clear.As for the character designs, I don't mind at all, you can imagine what they look like.I hope I can update every day without my internship being interrupted haha.