While the quality of the writing could do with some work, it is still legible and slightly better than the average novel that is translated from Chinese. The story so far has been iffy at best, there are plenty of inconsistencies where it would previously say he hasn't unlocked his Super Strength only to suddenly be able to overpower Spider-Woman who can easily lift 10 tons. Another issue that I found is that he has somehow managed to make a web slinger yet how he got web fluid for his sling hasn't been mentioned at all. There are also quite a few plot holes, for example, the protagonist is Superman, and as such the world has somehow twisted reality and turned Peter Parker (the protagonist) into an alien. Complete with a spaceship and everything. However, given that Peter's parents were SHIELD agents, it is highly unlikely that they would not be informed of such, and he would've likely been kidnapped by Hydra already for experimentation. This is also excluding the fact that SHIELD most likely would have detected his ship crashing and would've investigated even if Peter's parents were not SHIELD agents. The character design for the protagonist isn't anything to write home about, it is however pretty foolish in my opinion. To me, it seems like the author is trying to create a character who acts as both a good guy and a bad guy, but it's still too early to talk about how well that is going. My biggest issue is that there just isn't a reasonable justification as to why the protagonist wants to be a villain and cause chaos, but then also be a hero at the same time. Gwen Stacy, is also decent, from what I can see, she does feel like a teenager who is new to the hero business. It is, however, also jarring when the author does action such as drawing the protagonist and then ripping up the paper to 'get revenge' for the beating she received from him. Given that this is a translated novel, the update frequency should be fairly stable for quite a while until it catches up to the raws. And on a side note, I find it funny how the Superman comics are also a thing in the world the protagonist resides in.
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LIKEAnd on a side note, I find it funny how the Superman comics in the world. I hate how it cut off the rest of the review, if there is a character limit at least make it so I can't post if it goes over... And of course they had to get rid of the paragraphs.
