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Review Detail of Ahmad_Thair in HP: Magic Punk

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Ahmad_Thair
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very boring and annoying way of writing stories is all over the place .doesn't make any sense .making level and magic stage and learning law at stage one doesn't make any sense even if you nerfed the law .the mc is very stupid childish forget to use any of his power at almost every singal situstion character interaction is so awkward . world background being changed is ok ,making it shit and incomprehensible is not

HP: Magic Punk

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