It's a good read, just a little bit of showing instead of telling could get one engrossed, but the plot has potential .. . Keep it up dear Author
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Sparty_Zienda:Thank you 😊for taking the time to read my book and share your honest thoughts. Your feedback is truly valuable to me. 🤩Your insights have given me a fresh perspective and highlighted areas where I can enhance my storytelling skills. I will diligently address these issue in my future writing endeavors.🤞Thank you again for helping me on my journey as a writer.