Best ff to recommend to your friend to torture them. Or better yet if you're a autistic chinese on drugs and your family doesnt show you a little bit of love since birth that results in you having masochistic tendencies, this is definitely for you.

the summary for the story was interesting so i decide to give this ff a read but this ff is an absolute mess story/lore wise and also appatently au if i could summerize the story recap the mc has in the first chapter it would be like talking your dog to the back of your house and shooting him in the head the amount of aneurysm and whiplash i got from the first chapter alone would be enough to kill me so for people that are invested in the cyberpunk lore i would not recomend this book but for those that dont care about the lore or just want buch of dates and events missmatched or completely made up ones than this is for you

Makes absolutely no sense… probably written by a drunk underpowered IA cause reading a chapter will left you confused with a headache… a big sord salad but no meaning.

The story's pretty good. (If you can follow it) The grammar is.... well, I've certainly read worse The real kicker however is that this story reads like it was written by an Alzheimer's victim. The author can't keep straight who he's talking about. One minute it's the Maelstrom gang, next they're the Valentinos, then they suddenly become the Voodoo Boy's.

this is an honest review, to anyone who is really into cyberpunk. this probably isn't for you, it's all over the place. the author can't keep the timelines in check, and you can't tell who's talking most of the time because each sentence is separated and not put into one paragraph for each person's responseExample: person A ".........""......"".....""......"only now does person B respond ".....""....""....""...."

I don't agree with the overly negative reviews. While neither the writing quality / story, nor the translation is top notch, it's not as bad as other reviews suggest. It most certainly is enough to get your fix in until your favorite other edgerunner fanfics are posting another chapter.

the names are everywhere MC has 10 different names and talks to characters that don't exist or aren't there

Best cyberpunk fanfiction exactly what I have been looking for.

The most confusing thing with the most conflicting information of events I've ever read, and the way it's written it's clearly an AI that was drunk for sure.

if you can ignore the horrendous amount of getting names mixed up its an okay novel if you can ignore this stuff like the chapter im on he keep saying voodoo boys gang you dont see a mistake haha well he was fighting maelstrom. M A E L S T R O M, not voodoo boys and i guess every club and restaurant is just the afterlife club. its really annoying like really annoying. other than that i actually like the novel but this guy really need to fix these mistakes