Review Detail of Yuri_yuri in Different Batman
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I don't like your work in general. because it seems like they are telling a story in the first person and then in the third person, I don't know how to describe it. Furthermore, the changes in points of view are very abrupt. Your story ideas are interesting but poorly executed. I hope that in a few months your writing will improve.
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And this is a person that thinks being smart or intelligent means you can’t do stupid things. No matter how smart or intelligent someone is they can and will do something stupid.
Yuri_yuri:I take back everything I said before... This fanfic is trash and mediocre like all the others... The protagonist tries to say that he is very intelligent, extremely intelligent, all the chapters refer to how very intelligent but he does stupid things