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2023-12-16 13:07

It's alright and good to pass the time. Skip the diary chapters because they are pointless and the MC has an IQ drop during them, he doesn't act like the MC at all. The author also has a bad habit of hiding things from the audience and gets upset when people don't have the patience when being lied to. Twists are fine but don't lie to the reader to pull it off, it comes off as a bad 4th wall break and is annoying. Other than that it's an enjoyable read but it feels more like Rick and the other two templets are missing.

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